Monday, October 25, 2010

changes

 I think I have made quite a few significant changes in my writing. for starters my writing has become  more organized. I structure my support and quotes; stronger and more logically. I can also identify and correct grammar mistakes easily now. I also use a lot more detail in my writing. in these next 5 weeks i wanna focus in on strengthening my thesis statements and my topic sentences. Also I want to work on making stronger outlines, so that I can make my entire essay stronger.
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  1. Marcus AdamsOctober 26, 2010 at 5:28 AM

    I agree using the outlines!

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  2. Shawnique WilliamsOctober 26, 2010 at 5:28 AM

    I agree with you on the outline part. A strong outline can help create a even stronger essay

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  3. PaulaOctober 26, 2010 at 5:29 AM

    I know right,i never wrote outlines either. Now, i'm comfortable in using them and i will continue to do so.

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  4. AnonymousOctober 26, 2010 at 5:30 AM

    i think that wat most ppl in the class needs to work on

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  5. franklin aguilarOctober 26, 2010 at 5:30 AM

    true i aslo plan to do the same at first i thought it was a waste of time but now they have really helped

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  6. kyung ohOctober 26, 2010 at 5:32 AM

    at first, it was more comfortable not doing the outlines, but now i feel it really comes in handy

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  7. Timothy MalloyOctober 26, 2010 at 5:33 AM

    same but i focusing on all areas at least for me.

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  8. Stephanie GogginsOctober 26, 2010 at 5:42 AM

    You seem to be very focused and decidated keep up the good job. I'm sure you wiil be a great writer in the furture and you will for sure pass eng 001 and go on to eng 002. Good Luck.

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